托福写作优劣文章对比

第1篇：托福写作优劣文章对比

原创托福独立写作分类+文章写作

独立写作

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改写题目，用引发读者兴趣的语言表明全文的主旨。

展开(开门见山、下定义、设问、排比、引谚语、引数据、欲扬先抑) Paragraph 2

Topic Sentence——引出第一个分论点 展开(事例、列举、比较、因果、假设、让步) Paragraph 3

Topic Sentence——引出第二个分论点 展开(事例、列举、比较、因果、假设、让步) Paragraph 4

Topic Sentence——引出第三个分论点 展开(事例、列举、比较、因果、假设、让步) Paragraph 5

再次总结观点。

结尾(提出警告、展望未来、权衡利弊、引用名言、反问加强)

观点的选择：尽量选择一方，中立也要有所倾向。

2. 分类梳理(形式分类下每类写3篇全文，内容分类下每类写3篇思路)：

①Agreeing or Disagreeing

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What does the word “game” mean to you? Different people can tell different answers. Some may say “Game means to win”, and others may say “Game means to challenge ourselves.” However, in my point of view, having fun and enjoying the process are always the real meaning of the “game”. Accordingly, playing a game is fun no matter you lose or win, as long as you join it heart and soul.

First and foremost, participants are able to get great joy during the process of the game. A proverb has it that “the most important thing is to participate”. So even though the final result is not very satisfactory, or even worse, we can still find something precious and enjoyable when we join the game. For instance, I played a geography game with my classmates during the summer camp last year. Each group was asked to follow several clues and find the final destination with a GPS receiver. Though we came from different nations, my partners and I discussed thoroughly and cooperated closely. We successfully found the final position in a short time. Even though we only made it third, in other word we actually lost the game, we still had great fun and felt really proud of our dedicate collaboration.

Furthermore, beside success, failure can also teach us a lot and those we learned from failures may turn into greater happiness later. Life is always filled with bitter and sweet, so one can never expect to win all the time, even in the game. Although feeling frustrated and depressed, we can always draw some lessons and get precious experiences from those failures or debacles. It looks as if we lost a game, but in fact we acquired so many knowledge and skills which would help us a lot in the future and had a better understanding of our life. For example, a gifted basketball player might be selfish and overconfident when he enters a team. But after a fiasco, he is sure to understand that basketball is game of 5 people and start to enjoy the close collaboration with his teammates.

In conclusion, although victory can give us great happiness, it is not the only fun we can have from games. If we can treat failures with a positive attitude, we will be more likely to get greater achievements and joy in the future.

②Stating a Preference

Passage 1

“Every bean has its black”, as the saying goes. The rapid development of automobile industry has p more and more choices to consumers and made the transportation much more convenient than it used to be. Even though the prosperity of automobiles has also caused some thorny problems, I believe that its benefits are so great that it will be unfair to neglect them and emphasize the negative effects only.

Imagine living in a metropolis where neither cars nor buses can be available. How terrible could this be? It’s automobiles that has improved modern transportation greatly and connected different parts of the land together. Although more and more people choose to get work on foot or by bicycle, in order to reduce the air pollution, there are still over 80% of people, according to a recent survey, travel by automobile in the morning. Thus, automobiles are still the first choice when people go out because they’re fast, convenient and safe. There’s no doubt that automobiles have played such an important, even irreplaceable, role in the transportation nowadays that they are considered as a fundamental element of modern life.

On the other hand, it’s true that the development of automobiles has caused a series of issues. For example, cars all over the world will produce millions of tons of carbon dioxide each year, a number that is huge enough to increase the greenhouse effect and further heat up the Earth. Many other serious environmental problems like floods and droughts might come about afterwards. However, I have to say that though it looks as if those negative effects are inevitable, it doesn’t mean we have no idea to reach a balance between development and environment friendly. Many scientist and engineers are striving for a breakthrough in developing a new fuel that is clean, efficient, and

cheap. We have good reasons to believe that one day people will find the final answer to the conflict caused by automobiles and achieve real sustainable development.

As I have mentioned above, pollutions, traffic jam, noises, all of these can be great challenges for the development of automobiles. However, we cannot deny that automobiles have made significant contributions towards the modern society.

③Giving an Explanation

Passage 1

“Each has his own ideal”, as the saying goes. Different people may have different answer to the question “why do people attend universities?” Expecting to learn some advanced knowledge, dreaming about experiencing something new or exciting, meeting some lifetime friends. All of these can be reasons why people attend colleges and universities. However, in my opinion, people attend college or university mainly to find their real interest and design a blueprint for their own future, including their careers, workplaces, families, etc.

First of all, students are usually mature enough to start thinking about their future when they attend college or university. Take one of my friends, Inn, as an example. Inn always had many different thoughts when he was a high school student. He initially wanted to be a scientist, then an engineer like his father, and finally he told me that he found an interest in psychology when he graduated from high school. However, when he attended the university and really got the chance to think over and design his own future, he found that his real interest is architecture. So he chose architecture and design as his major and did an excellent job during his undergraduate studies. Now he’s pursuing for his graduate degree and preparing to go abroad to study with his girlfriend. It is university that gives Inn, as well as other people, I suppose, a chance to plan and prepare for their future carefully and helps them lead a

happy life.

So it’s right time for people to plan for their journey in front when they enter university and, in fact, university is the very place where they can choose their own directions freely and follow their bent. There are thousands of universities all over the world and in each country there are some good universities for its people to get high-quality education and prepare for their career. What’s more, each university or colleges consists of many different departments and schools so that it can offer students a large amount of courses in different areas. Accordingly, universities and colleges are ideal places for students to find a right track for their life and pursuing for the excellence on their own way.

In conclusion, as I have shown above, I think people attend college or university mainly for a good chance to find their life goals.

④Making an Argument

Passage 1

The Mid-autumn day, which is endowed with lots of meanings by Chinese people, is considered as one of the most important festivals in China. On this day, Chinese families will have a reunion and share a wonderful night together. Among all the activities we will do on the Mid-autumn day, viewing the moon is undoubtedly the most indispensible one. Just as the festival itself, moon-viewing is also granted with many beautiful feelings by Chinese people. So the Mid-autumn festival is the custom that I would like people from other countries to adopt.

First of all, the Moon on the Mid-autumn day is always the most beautiful one of the year. Not only because its brightness and fullness, but also its beauty and clearness can be shared by the whole family. On the dusk of Mid-autumn day, a bright Moon will come over the horizon as soon as the Sun goes down. Thus as long as the sky is clear, the Moon can be seen all night on Mid-autumn. That is to say, whenever the families go out, they can always find the gorgeous moon in the sky. Nowadays, people are always too busy to spend their precious time staying with their families; the Mid-autumn day, however, offers people a wonderful chance to have a family reunion

and communicate with their families. It would be such a nice thing if the family sat down together in the yard and watched the Moon blissfully.

If Moon viewing had the only meaning of family reunion or festival celebration, it wouldn’t be so widely considered as one of the most enjoyable event. When people look at the Moon on the Mid-autumn day, they are often amazed and they would immerse themselves in thought under the moonlight. The raw beauty and clearness of the Moon can always stir them to the depth of their souls and evoke the tenderest emotions in their hearts. Su Shi, one of the most famous poets in China, wrote down his best-known composition under the mid-autumn moon. People living in foreign places may also think of their family and friends in the far-away land; on the Mid-autumn night, when they look up the sky, the dazzling moon can be such a consolation.

In conclusion, as I’ve said above, viewing the moon on the Mid-autumn day is such an enjoyable tradition for Chinese people that I would like to introduce this beautiful custom to people from other countries. I hope all the people can find their beautiful “moon” on Mid-autumn night, as well as the precious emotions in their life.

第2篇：托福写作高分文章怎么写

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托福写作高分文章怎么写?

当面对重重阻力的时候，很多人不禁产生了怀疑。我们是否应该使用模板?使用模板是否会导致低分?我们到底该用什么模板?其实答案很简单，模板应该用，必须用，大胆用!

但是有一个十分重要的前提性条件，那就是模板一定是要原创的!原创的?!开玩笑，我们这辈子从来就没自己思考过，一直都是老师喂到我们嘴里的!是的，这就是你一直咒骂中国式教育的起点。其实很多满分作文都是使用了模板，但是由于使用的十分之精巧，同时再加上是原创托福作文模板，因此连考官也拿他没有办法，人家写的就是棒吗!

OK，先来看两段例子!第一段是不好的例子，第二段是好的例子。

Nowadays， thanks to the development of Internet， we are exposed to a vast ocean of information. Some argue that so much information brings a great benefit to our life and study. But for me， the experience with surfing Internet leads me to believe that accessing much information cause more problems than it solves.

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Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to students as education. Despite various responses people may have on the topic concerning the issue regarding which thing should the education aim at. I， given the chance， prefer to endorse that preparing for careers should have primary consideration.

当看到第一篇文章的时候，已经没有了当初得的兴奋，因为这样的文章实在是太常见了!首先Nowadays这个单词是被无数老师推崇的“高级”单词。一直无法理解，为什么有的单词会更高级。然后thanks to节宾语，天呐!多么明显的模板!当我往下看的时候，我只能无意识的检查是否有语法错误，没有语法错误的话，我也就只能给个一般的分数就好了。

但是当看到第二篇文章的时候，初看觉得此文写得不错。用词准确地道，而且完全是自己完成没有模板，但是当我回头再一回味这篇文章的时候，惊讶的发现，这篇文章竟然也是由模板所出!首先Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to students as education。看似平淡无奇，但是实际上Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to就是一个模板，更厉害的是下一句!Despite various responses people may have on the topic concerning the issue regarding which thing should the education aim at.这么长的一句话，竟然只有最后3个单词不是模板!然后再接下来，下一句的“given the chance， ”其实对于整句话来说根本就没有任何实际上语义的改变!但适当加进来之后，我们会感觉到非常的地道!这篇文章身上完全看不出半点模板的影子，为什么看不出作文模板的影子呢?就是因为这篇文章的模板是完全原创的，哪怕不是原创的，也是仅在小范围内流传的!而且这篇文章后面类似的妙手不计其数!

第3篇：美国大学本科申请 托福vs雅思申请优劣谈

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美国大学本科申请:托福vs雅思申请优劣谈

常常听准备申请美国留学的学生抱怨说托福不好报名，又说听到一些培训的老师讲托福比雅思难，所以考雅思容易些。反正雅思也被美国的大学广泛接受，看似一样，为什么不考一个容易一点的呢?

那么考雅思对美国大学的申请会有什么影响，是否真的做到和考托福一样公平一致，下面资深留学专家来给大家分析一下。

先看申请美国本科大学的要求。在美国usnews&worldreport2012Top10的大学名单里面，所有学校都接受托福成绩，要求基本上最低是100+(麻省理工是90+)，而雅思却有不少学校说no.这些学校分别是普林斯顿大学、加州理工学院、麻省理工大学、斯坦福大学，另外还有一所极不情愿接受但是学生如果在特殊情况下只能考雅思可以根据情况的特殊性而定，这所学校是宾夕法尼亚大学。这么一看有一半的学校至少在2013年秋季的申请中还是无法接受雅思成绩，如果是目标极高的同学，考了雅思可能就错过了这些名校的申请。

再看托福和雅思的分数对比，一般我们会默认托福100雅思7分，托福90雅思6.5分，托福80雅思6分，托福70雅思5.5，以下以此类推。但美国大学在公布雅思的要求时明显不是按照这个套路出牌的，比如所有的能接受本科申请的加州大学的9个校区对托福的要求最高不超过83分，而对雅思的要求全部是7分，二者的悬殊巨大，其他要求悬殊的大学还有乔治亚大学托福80雅思

7、新泽西州立大学逻各斯校区托福79雅思

7、密苏里大学(该校要求托福61雅思6.5)。前100名的美国大学直录要求中托福最低为71分，而前100的美国大学中雅思没有学校低于6分的。

可见考雅思的同学申请加州的大学的门槛分数要求比托福高太多了。

最后还要一点要注意的是，无论是托福还是雅思，有些学校不仅要求总分，还可能会有各个单项的要求，比如伍斯特理工学院、东北大学、爱荷花大学等学校总分要求6.5分，单科要求每个部分不低于6分。

在准备自己的本科申请时，一定要清楚的了解到每个学校的具体分数要求，做到心中有数。在中国学生分数一年比一年高的形势下，盲目申请撞运气的机会已经十分渺茫了。

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第4篇：条码打印软件与条码打印机的优劣对比

说到条码标签打印，肯定离不开条码打印软件或者条码打印机。目前，打印条码标签有两种方式：条码打印机打印方式和软件配合激光打印机方式。两种方式各有优缺点，并且各有其理想的适用场合。那究竟该怎么选择呢?下面就条码打印软件与条码打印机得优劣列举一二。以作对比。

先说条码打印机打印：条码打印机打印方式是一种传统的条码打印方式。条码打印机是一种专用设备，一般有热敏型和热转印型打印方式，使用专用的标签纸和碳带。条码打印机打印速度快，可打印特殊材料(PVC等)，可外接切刀等进行功能扩展，但打印机价格和耗材较贵(专用的标签纸和色带)，功能单一只能作为打印标签使用，维护复杂，对标签宽度有一定的限制，适合于需大量制作标签的专业用户使用。目前常用的品牌有DATAMAX、ZEBRA、CLEVER等。

其次使用条码标签设计打印软件与激光打印机打印：应用普通的打印机配合专门的条码标签设计打印软件是制作条码标签的另一种方式。该方式可实现一机多用，打印精度高，激光打印机一般在600DPI，条码识别率高，图形表现能力强，设计操作简单，一次打印数量多，可以大批量打印，成本较低，且可打印彩色标签。但其打印速度较慢，打印机容易发热，且可打印材料较少。主要的条码打印软件有LabelPainter、CODESOFT、BARONE等。

根据上面的比较，两者各有优缺点，分别适用于不同的场合：在需大量打印标签的地方，特别是工厂需在短时间内大量打印以及需要特殊标签(如PVC材料、防水材料)、需要即用即打(如售票处等)的地方，应选择条码打印机。在标签打印量较少，且多为一次性打印的地方(如图书馆)，应选择激光打印方式。在外观上,普通打印机打印的条码是使用小圆点组成的，在放大后有明显的凹凸感，当条码窄条很窄时，这种情况尤为突出，而且窄条的浓度会很淡。而条码打印机的打印头上的点是矩形的，所以条码打印机打印的条码是用实线组成，不会出现上面的问题。在一些小型商场、小型工厂等地方，两种方式都可选择。

也就是说，如果您经常大量打印标签，或对标签有特殊要求，且您的财力又允许，您应选择条码打印机;如您的标签打印量不很大，财力上又不想花费太多，您应选择激光打印机。利用软件和激光打印方式，不仅能满足您条码标签打印的需求，还能用它来制作名片、胸卡、打印信函签等。

归根到底，条码打印软件也是要连接打印机的。不过像LabelPainter这样专业的条码打印软件支持多种打印机对接，在设计上似乎又比条码打印机要灵活的多。究竟是谁更技高一筹?事实是条码打印软件与条码打印机各有所长，用户也只需各取所需罢了。

第5篇：托福阅读和SAT阅读的对比一览

【文章篇幅】

360教育集团说，托福阅读共三篇文章(加试除外)，每篇字数在700字左右，而SAT阅读共有四篇短阅读和五篇长阅读，其中分别有一组短对比文章和一组长对比文章。短文章100-150字，而长阅读字数在600-800之间。因此从文章数目上来说，SAT阅读更多。而文章篇幅上，托福阅读没有短阅读。

【文章题材】

托福阅读和SAT阅读题材都很广泛，涉及自然科学和人文社科等。但是，它们的文章角度略有不同。通常在托福阅读中，作者的态度较为客观，只是陈述一些事实，涉及观点也多数为某些学者的观点。而在SAT阅读中则不然，SAT阅读中的议论文中的论证更明显。作者会针对某件事情提出自己的观点，然后加以论证。如果涉及其他人的观点，作者也会有倾向性的支持或者反对。此外，SAT阅读还涉及一些文学作品，这是另外一个很大的不同。这些文学作品多数为小说，有自传体的回忆录，也有以人物为中心的故事。因此，SAT阅读比托福阅读更富有人文主义色彩。

【题目数量】

托福阅读部分共39-40题，而SAT阅读是48题。托福阅读的考试时间是60分钟，而SAT的48题和填空部分的19题一起在70分钟内完成。因此，文章多、题目多、时间紧，SAT较托福考试对考生的阅读和做题效率要求更高。

【题型设置】

托福考试涉及以下十大题型：细节题、排除题、推断题、修辞目的题、词汇题、指代题、简化句子题、插入句子题、文章内容小结题、完成图表题。SAT阅读也是十大题型：主旨题、作用题、修辞题、态度题、词汇题、互联题、求同题、求异题、推理题和假设题。

题型设置略有不同，托福阅读侧重对文章内容的理解，而SAT阅读考查考生对作者写作手法的理解。