高考英语作文真题：2009高考满分作文
2009高考英语满分作文
【全国卷I海南、宁夏】
【试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：
1.外出购物天星版权所有
2.替房东还书
3.Tracy 来电话留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消2)此事已告知Susan3) 尽快回电
注意：1. 词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Mrs. Wilson,
I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.Yours,Li Hua
本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确，各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。
【北京卷】
【试题回放】情景作文
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。
注意：词数不少于60天星教育网
提示词：郊区 suburbs
April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others
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were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.【名师点评】本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，在语言的表达上选词新颖，同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。
【北京卷】
【试题回放】开放作文
请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50
In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
What an interesting picture! A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.
【名师点评】本文是开放性作文，要求考生把握好图画内容，发散表达。考生重点要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人，要体会到西式刀叉对中式食物的矛盾性。行文结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。
【江苏卷】
【试题回放】鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。但是，过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文。
鼠标的必要性对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪……天星版权所有 鼠标的便捷性点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除……编辑文本，搜索信息…… 收发邮件，选购商品…… 点播音乐，下载电影…如果过分依赖鼠标…… (请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点)
注意：
1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计人总词数。
3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。天星教育网
The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.
For most people, it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.
A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.【名师点评】本文为提纲式说明文体裁，所选内容与我们生活相关，考生只要把所给要点逐条陈述，适度发挥，不要逐条翻译即可。文章说理清楚，语言流畅，句式表达多样，用词恰当、准确。不失为一篇满分作文。
现实问题篇：
(开头)As time goes on, people are getting richer and richer and their life is getting better and better.As a result, more people (are ready to do)________. But different people have different ideas so that opinions are divided into two parts.
(中间)Some people hold the belief that. As we all know, every coin has its two sides. There is the opinion that
(结尾)From my point of view, many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but above everything else, the following one(好几种方法就用复数 ones) may bemost effective._________________(一两句话说明解决方法).(总结) We must devote ourselves to do_________. Only in this we can we live a beautiful life.
(开头)随着时代的变化，人们越来越富裕生活越来越好。所以，更多的人想要_______。 但是不同的人想法不同，所以就有了两种观点。
(中间)一些人认为________(观点一)。众所周知，每一个硬币都有不同的两面。所以还有另外的一个观点_______(观点二)。
(结尾)以为我的观点来看，很多方案可以解决这个问题，但是综合来看，下面的方法是最有效地。_________________(一两句话说明解决方法). (总结) 我们要努力_________. 只有这样，我们的生活才会更美好。
图表作文的框架
As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease, rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________. In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
高考英语高考作文评分标准,答题技巧,答题方法
1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次 的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3. 词数少于 80和多于 120的，从总分中减去2分。
4. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影 响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。 6. 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
7. 内容要点可用不同方式表达，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
【各档次的给分范围和要求】
第五档(很好);(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 覆盖所有内容要点。
3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。
5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好)：(16-20分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉
1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6. 达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档(适当)：(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
6. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档(较差)：(6-10分)
1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档(差)：(1-5分)
1. 未完成试题规定的任务。
2. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
6. 信息未能传达给读者。
不得分：(0分)
未能传达给读者仟何信息：内容太少，无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
【作文答题技巧、解题方法】
写作短文时，要注意审题，对写什么和怎么写必须有一个清晰的思路。很多考生动笔就写，错了以后再涂改，严重影响卷面整洁，也影响了成绩;其次要在遣词造句上多下功夫。尽可能运用较熟悉的词组、短语或成语;第三要力求变换各种句式，当然，也不能片面追求花哨文字，拼凑错误百出的句子，使成绩大打折扣;行文连贯是阅卷教师比较看重的一个方面。要有好的开头和好的结尾;为了使文章结构严密，增强说服力和感染力，考生应该在句与句之间，恰当地使用一些过渡性词语。
另外，考生很容易出现句与句之间不使用连接词的错误，这是英语写作中的大忌。
最后，考生应该把写完的作文阅读两遍，认真检查是否有拼写方面的错误，是否有时态、语态方面的错误，是否存在中式英语等等。
【作文答题技巧、答题方法】
1、仔细审题，弄清大意。审题是写作的关键所在，仔细审题才能深刻理解题目所要表达的主要意思。不论是汉语提示写作还是看图写作，都要仔细审题，弄清写作内容，如背景、人物、时间、体裁等的要求。
2、编拟提纲，拟出要点。在弄清了题目所要表达的主要意思后，便可根据主要内容列出提纲，即整理出内容要点。理清要点的目的就是为了把握短文的脉络，不至于遗漏内容的要点。
3、紧扣要点，扩写成文。在列出要点后，依据要点扩写成文。扩写时，可运用想象适度发挥。但切记不可随意乱写，要紧扣画面或汉语提示，适当描述，连贯通顺即可，不能把汉语提示全部译成英语。
4、反复检查，修正错误。扩写成文后，考生应将扩写后的文章认真读一读，检查是否有错误。在检查时，着重看短文是否扣住了提示或图画的内容，要点是否有遗漏。同时，还要注意有无语法错误，如时态、人称等，是否符合文体特点、格式等等。
5、写作，要注意留够时间，一般需要20分钟。最好能打草稿，这样可以减少错误，书写也比较清晰工整。作文注意内容要点要全，语言要通顺。提倡用小词小句来写，适当用复杂结构。
高考英语作文：高考后的打算
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147 高考结束之后，有的同学想去旅游，因为蓝天和美景能够使他们放松;有的同学打算在家好好欣赏期待已久的2012奥运会;也有的同学想趁这个机会体验一下生活，他们认为考上大学就真正开始走上社会了。
请你用英语写一篇短文简述以上内容,并谈一下你的打算。 注意：
1、词数100左右;
2、为使行文连贯可适当发挥。 范文：
After the college entrance examination, some students would like to have a trip, because they think the blue sky and the charming scenery can make them relax. Some others prefer to stay at home to enjoy the matches of the 2012 Olympic Games, which they have been longing for. And also there are some students who intend to observe and learn from real life. They consider that they will really step into society after passing the college entrance examination. As for me, I plan to learn a skill such as driving, which I think will be useful in the future.
高考英语作文必备黄金句子
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678 开头
1、As can be seen in the picture ,…
2、The picture seems to convey us a message that…
3、What the picture conveys is that…
4、The picture wants to remind us of the importance of self-awareness.
5、The picture vividly conveys to us all ….
6、It is obviously shown in the picture that..
7、What the picture conveys goes far beyond only a picture itself. It carries deeper meanings.
8、My understanding of the picture is that…
9、The picture reflects a story that…
10、As is depicted in the picture,…
11、The picture intends to warn us not to…
12、The picture intends to convey the message that
13、What the picture tries to convey is that… 中间说明
1、We can often see this similar phenomenon in our daily life.
2、This is not uncommon in our daily life.
3、By helping others, we ourselves actually gain a lot.
4、Lack of a sound self-knowledge, they are bound to fail.
5、As to us , we should a right judgment to our ability and choose to do what are really suitable for us.
6、We can often see this similar phenomenon in our daily life.
7、While the picture looks funny, it really has a profound meaning for us to take into consideration.
8、Only by choosing the most suitable methods for our studies can we gain as much as possible in the end.
9、As a matter of fact, in our daily life, there exist …..
10、What is more important is that…
11、Similarly in life, if we are always content with whatever we have achieved, we will gradually lose the drive to dream big and reach high, eventually ending up a failure. Therefore, once we have set a goal, we should just go for it persistently.
12、All of us will benefit a lot from it.
13、In our daily life, we may meet with kinds of problems.
14、There are many similar phenomena in our life. 结尾
1、What impressed me most is …
2、We had a photo taken to record the unforgettable experience, which gave us a good chance to build up courage and improve our sense of teamwork.
4、I really feel happy about what we did that day.
5、When everything was done, I breathed a sigh of relief.
6、We are more than glad to have such kind of activities, for we not only set up the bridge of friendship with the children in Tibet but also show our love to the children there.
英语写作中常用的表达方式
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239 1.….是…..
1)说起来容易做起来难。
It is easy to say but difficult to practice. It is easier said than done. 2)他获奖是最令人激动的消息。
It was the most exciting news that he got the prize. 3)掌握一件事是很难的。
4)我们知道一些学习方法是有必要的。 2.很有可能会…; 大可…
主语+ may well+ 动词原形。陈述句+ and well +主语+ may. 1) He may well get very angry. He gets very angry, and well he may. 2)他很可能会这么说。 3.渐渐开始， 转而开始 主语+ come to +动词原形。 1) 我越了解他， 就越喜欢他。
The more I knew him, the better I came to like him. 2)她渐渐意识到他的做法是错误的。 4.习惯做某事
主语+ make it a rule to +动词原形。 主语+ make a point of + 动名词 It is a rule with sb.+ to +动词原形。 过去的惯常行为：used to do 我习惯在傍晚的时候出去散步。
I make it a rule to go out for a walk towards evening. I make a point of going out for a walk towards evening. It is a rule with me to go out for a walk towards evening. 1)他过去常常在星期天到我家访问。
2)我每天通常早起，洗个冷水澡，到外面散散步，然后再以清晰的头脑做我的每日功课。 5.据说……; 听说…… 据说运动会在月底举行。
The sports meeting is said to be held at the end of the month. It is said that the sports meeting will be held at the end of the month. I am told that the sports meeting will be held at the end of the month. I/ we hear that the sports meeting will be held at the end of the month. 1)听说在开幕式结束后，上午10：30 就可以进场。 6.不明白(究竟……) I wonder +疑问词/ if
1) 我想知道他要乘哪次火车离开这里。 I wonder by which train he will leave here. 2) 我想知道他是否对这件事有兴趣。 I wonder / am wondering if he is interested in it. 3) 我想知道她是否已经出发旅行了。
3)我想知道如果她现在就出发的话能否赶上这班火车。 7.归功于……(A owes B to C) 他把他的成功归功于你的努力。 He owes his success to your efforts. 1)我有今天是父母的功劳。
2)他后来成为伟大的科学家得益于他少年时代的辛勤工作。 8.最佳的……是……
打好英语作文基础的最佳途径就是阅读许多浅显的书籍。
The best way to lay the foundation of English composition is to read many easy books. One can lay the best foundation of English composition by reading many easy books.
There is no better way to lay the foundation of English composition than to read many easy books. 享受自然之美的最佳途径就是到乡下去。 9.预定要……
今年9月我们要搬到新校舍去。
We are expected to move to the new schoolhouse in September.
请大家注意: 明天下午5点在301室召开全体教师大会，望准时参加。 10.如此……以至于……
这本书非常有趣，我把它读了一遍又一遍。
This book is so interesting that I have read it again and again. As this book is very interesting, I have read it again and again. This book being very interesting, I have read it again and again. This is such an interesting book that I have read it again and again. 他如此热心， 以至于人人都喜欢他。 11.直到……才(开始)
直到在国外旅行的时候，我才开始深深体会到语言不通是多么不方便。
I had not realized how inconvenient it was when one could not make oneself understand till I travelled in a foreign country.
I had realized how inconvenient it was when one could not make oneself understood only after I travelled in a foreign country.
我匆匆忙忙，到了车站时才发现忘记带钱包了。 12.对比议论
1)我同意这个计划。首先，建工厂会给人们提供不同的工作。 其次，它可以省许多钱。最后，它不会对环境有太大危害。 I agree to/am in favor of /am for the plan. To begin/start with, the building of the factory will provide people with different jobs. Secondly, it can save a lot of money. Last but not the least, it won’t do much harm to the environment.
2) 我反对这个计划。一方面，它会占去学校太多的空间。另一方面，机器的噪音会影响我们的教学工作。总之，我认为这不是个好计划。
I don’t agree to/am against the plan. On the one hand/For one thing, it will take up too much space of our school. On the other hand/For another thing, the noise of the machines will have a bad effect on our teaching work. In a word, I don’t think it is a good plan.
13. 倒装句常用句式
1)Only in this way can we learn English well. 2) Not until his mother came back did he have dinner.
3) Not only can the little boy speak English well, but he also can speak French fluently. 4) 只有通过努力学习， 我们的愿望才能实现。 14.我们有充足的理由相信…… We have good reason to believe…… 15.引出事物的优点……
当今许多人愿意进行晨练，应为这对我们的健康意义重大，以下是它带来的好处。
Nowadays many people prefer doing morning exercises because it has a significant role in our health. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.
16.引出事物的缺点
正如一句流行谚语所说：任何事物都是一分为二的。这个也不例外，换句话说，它也有消极的一面。 Just as a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides”, this project is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.
17.用于描写漫画，图表的常用句型 1)As the graph depicts, …..
2)From the cartoon/picture, we can see that…
3)According to the statistics shown in the first/second paragraph, … 4)The table shows/ indicates/ reveals that ….
5)It can be seen/concluded from the picture/table/ figures that….
从这幅图画中， 我们可以看到，一位鸭妈妈为保护鸭宝宝免受强阳光的照射，正撑着一把伞。 正如我们在图画中看到的那样，左边的售货员正仔细检查钞票的
高考英语作文之环境保护类
经典例句：
1. It’s our duty to save water 这是我们的责任节约用水
2. As we know , water is very important to man, 2。我们知道，水是非常重要的人， 3. We can’t live without water. 我们的生活离不开水。
4. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.水的量是适宜的饮料是越来越少了
5. But some people don’t care about it, 但有些人不关心它。
6. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.许多河流和湖泊受到严重污染。 Something must be done to stop the pollution.必须采取某种措施来制止污染。 7. It"s our duty to protect our environment.它“是我们的责任来保护我们的环境。 8. It is very important to take care of our environment这是非常重要，我们要保护我们的环境
9. We should not throw litter onto the ground我们不应该往地上扔垃圾
10. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees我们不应该在公共场所吐痰/砍伐的树木
11. We should plant more flowers and trees。我们应该种更多的花和树。 12. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin我们必须拿起一些垃圾，扔到垃圾桶它
13. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.如果人人都为保护环境作出贡献，世界将变得更加美丽。 14. Trees are very helpful and important for us.树是非常有益的，对我们很重要。 15. We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future.我们应该种更多的树，为了生活得更好，更健康的未来。 It’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment.这是每个人的责任，爱护和保护环境 范文：
1、假如你是新华中学的学生，名叫MIKE。去年6月1日我国已经禁止使用塑料袋，你对此有何看法和什么好的建议?
参考答案:
I’m Mike. I am a student in Huaxing Middle School. Do you know the plastic bags? Do you often use the plastic bags? I don’t like them. I think they use the wasting valuable oil their production. And they can’t decompose(分解) in a short time. The plastic bags will make our world worse. I agree with the rule, which people can’t get the free plastic bags in the shops, supermarkets. It encourages people to use their cloth bags and baskets. It’s good for our environment. So I hope all the students in our class stop to use the plastic bags, and use our own cloth bags. I hope we can take care of our environment. Let’s make our world more and more beautiful.
2 、6月5日( June 5)是世界环境保护日， 我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，污染越来越严重……。假如你是学生Jone.，你校要进行“如何保护我们的环境?”专题演讲比赛。
要求：
1、举例说明环境存在的问题1—3方面;
2、如何保护好我们的环境，采取怎样的措施，举例1—3方面进行说明，字数80左右。
参考答案:
Dear headmasters, teachers, classmates and friends:
I’m very proud that I have chosen to speak to you all today, I’m a bit(=a little) nervous as I’ve never made a speech before to so many people ,so please forgive me if it shows.
As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse . In some places we can’t see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. .But what can we do? How to protect our environment ?For example ,we can go to school on foot or by bike . we can use shopping baskets not plastic bags when we go shopping and we can use both sides of the paper when we write . In a word ,if everyone pays more attention to our environment , there will be less pollution and our lives will be better.
“There is only one earth”, I hope everyone will protect our environment well. Thanks!
3、(江苏南通)目前南通市正在积极创建全国文明城市，中学生也在为之努力。假如你是你是某中学的一名学生张通，请根据下列图表所示内容，给笔友John写一封电子邮件，介绍有关情况。
注意：1.邮件内容应包含所有要点，不要简单翻译，可适当发挥;
2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名等信息;
3.词数90左右(邮件中已经写好了的部分，不计入总词数)。
4.参考词汇：civilized 文明的 respect 尊敬
Dear John,
I’m glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about our city. Nantong is trying to set up a national civilized city. We middle school students are also doing something for it.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________
Zhang Tong
参考答案:
Dear John,
I’m glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about our city. Nantong is trying to set up a national civilized city. We middle school students are also doing some things for it. We are all polite to our teachers. (In class, we listen carefully to them./ When we meet them, we always say hello to them./…) We also respect the old. For example, we help them cross the streets.
We are always ready to help each other. (When one has difficulty with his studies, others will help him at once./...)We often show our love to those in trouble. Last month, the students of my class donated money to the earthquake-hit areas.
Besides, we plant trees to protect the environment and make our city more beautiful.
Nantong is my hometown. I will do my best to turn Nantong into a civilized city.
Zhang Tong
4、保护环境( 四川乐山)
从2008年6月1日起，国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料袋，掀起全国“拒塑”的环保运动。假如你是李华，准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment” 为题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。
内容包含：
1.在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋;
2.尽可能地再利用使用过的课本;
3.离开教室应关灯;
4.最好走路或骑自行车上学;
5.简述理由：保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等
注意：
1.词数：80词左右。开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数;
2.可根据要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯;
3.文章中不能出现真实姓名和校名，否则以零分处理。
4.参考词汇：布袋子cloth bag塑料袋plastic bag保护protect能源energy污染pollution课本textbook
What Can We Do for the Environment
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.___________________________________________________
In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.
Thank you for your listening!
参考作文：
What Can We Do for the Environment
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.
The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment. The second thing we can do is to reuse(再利用) the old textbooks as possible as we can. We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy. What’s more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school. We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste.
In fact, even the simplest everyday activities(日常活动) can make a real difference to(对…有影响) the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.
Thank you for your listening!
5、.环境问题：
今天环境变得越来越糟糕,环境问题影响着人们的工作,学习,生活等,而我们的工作,生活,生产等又使环境污染越来越严重..........,如何保护我们的环境?请以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”为题写一篇短文。
提示：存在问题: 1.水污染越来越严重 2.砍伐森林严重 3. 大气污染严重 4. 白色垃圾等。
要求：如何改善/保护环境? 至少:3---4个方面， 80字左右的。
范文：
How to protect/save our environment/world?
The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today. Water is polluted, we have no clean water to drink. Many trees are cutting down, some animals is getting less and less. Some factories is pouring(排出) dirty air into the sky , the population is increasing faster and faster , resources is getting less and less…etc. Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future. People’s health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases. In order to live a better life, we need protect our world.
We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. We want to recycle(回收), reduce(减少), reuse(再利用) things . Don’t waste things ,This saves money and reduces pollution. Use things for as long as possible. We don’t use plastic bags . We must plant more trees and stop the people cutting them. We hope our world will be more and more beautiful .
6、为了保护地球有限的资源，我们应该采取什么措施呢?请根据下面提示写一篇约80词的短文，短文开头已经给出。
提示词：
1. save water, the source of life , protect drinking water, stop polluting, make full use of it;
2. save electricity, crucial, turn off, other electric machines;
3. save forests, useful ,stop cutting down;
4. recycle useful rubbish, save resources
参考作文：
Although the world develops much faster and better, the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer. In order to protect them, something must be done. Save water. Water is the source of life.(水是生命之源) No water, no life.(没有水，就没有生命) So it’s very important for us to do so. Not only should we(我们不仅应该…)protect drinking-water(饮用水) and stop polluting it, but also make full use of(充分利用) it.
Save electricity. It is crucial(关键的，至关重要的). We can’t imagine what the life will be like without it. Everyone should do his best to save electricity. Don’t forget to turn off lights or other electric machines(电器)when we finish working.
Save forests. They are useful .Please stop cutting them down and use recycled paper instead. Make our world a green one to live in.
Recycle useful rubbish. Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans, paper, bottles, and so on. We can save resources in this way. 随着现代社会经济的高速发展，人类赖以生存的环境变得越来越差，特那么提议感到积极宣传环保方面知识的重要性。请你根据下面图片中所提供的环境变化，用英文写一篇90个词左右的短文。
要求：
1. 描述图片由于环境污染造成的环境变化; 2. 作为学生，请你谈谈如何为保护环境作出贡献 例文：
Great changes have taken place in the village. From the picture we can see a same village in two photos are quite different. There are beautiful trees, flowers and grass in the first photo. In this photo we can see the sky is blue and beautiful, water is clean. However it is not be like that anymore. Let’s look at the second photo. Trees are less, the water isn’t clean, and the sky is not blue. More factories were established. The village is not beautiful anymore. It’s easy to see the environment is becoming worse. As a middle school student, we should do our best to protest our living place, but what should we do now? We’d better use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when going shopping. We should ride bicycle instead using cat to school. If everyone does something to the protection of our earth I believe the pollution will be reduced a lot.
立鼎教育高考英语作文模板
(一)：对比观点题型
(1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
①有一些人认为……;
②另一些人认为……;
③我的看法……。
The topic of ___________________(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ___________________(支持A的理由
一).What is more, ___________________(理由二). Moreover, ___________________ (理由三).
While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,___________________(支持B的理由一).Secondly (Besides),___________________(理由二).Thirdly(Finally)___________________ (理由三).
From my point of view, I think ___________________(我的观点). The reason is that ___________________ (原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .
(2)给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点。
Some people believe that ___________________(观点一). For example, they think ___________________(举例说明).And it will bring them ___________________ (为他们带来的好处).
In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,___________________ (我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ___________________ (反对的理由之二).
Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ___________________ (我对文章所讨论主题的看法).
(二)：阐述主题题型
要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述。
1.阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义;
2.分析并举例使其更充实。
The good old proverb ___________________(名言或谚语A)reminds us that ___________________ (释义). Indeed, we can learn many things form it.
First of all, ___________________ (理由一). For example, ___________________ (举例说明). Secondly, ___________________ (理由二). Another case is that___________________ (举例说明). Furthermore , ___________________ (理由三).
In my opinion, ___________________ (我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the saying___________________( A). If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.
(三)：解决方法题型
要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径。
1.问题现状;
2.怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)。
In recent days, we have to face the problem___________________(问题), which is becoming more and more serious. First, ___________________ (说明问题的现状).Second, ___________________ (举例进一步说明现状).
Confronted with ___________________(问题), we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ___________________ (解决方法一). For another ___________________ (解决方法二). Finally, ___________________ (解决方法三).
Personally, I believe that___________________ (我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ___________________ (带来的好处).
(四)：说明利弊题型
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)。
1.说明事物现状;
2.事物本身的优缺点(或一方面);
3.你对现状(或前景)的看法。
Nowadays many people prefer___________________( 事物现状), because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ,___________________ (优点一). Besides,___________________(优点二).But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ___________________ (缺点一).To make matters worse, ___________________(缺点二).
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ___________________ (我的看法)./From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of (事物现状), we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ___________________ (对前景的预测).
(五)：议论文的框架
(1)不同观点列举型(选择型)
There is a widespread concern over the issue that ___________________(作文题目). But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that ___________________(观点一). In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___________________(原因一).Furthermore, in the second place, ___________________(原因二). So it goes without saying that ___________________(观点一).
People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that ___________________(观点二). In their point of view, on the one hand，___________________(原因一). On the other hand, ___________________(原因二). Therefore, there is no doubt that___________________(观点二).
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that ___________________(观点一或观点二). It is not only because ___________________, but also because ___________________. The more
______________, the more___________________ .
(2)利弊型的议论文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that) ___________________(作文题目). In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in ___________________(题目议题). Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___________________(优点一). And secondly___________________(优点二).
Just as a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, ___________________(讨论议题) is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___________________(缺点一). In addition, ___________________(缺点二).
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of ___________________(讨论议题) into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ___________________(讨论议题).
( 3 )答题性议论文
Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that) ___________________(作文题目).It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all, ___________________(途径一). In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___________________(途径二).
Above all, to solve the problem of ___________________(作文题目), we should find a number of various ways. But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ___________________(方法).( 4 )谚语警句性议论文
It is well known to us that the proverb: “___________________(谚语)”has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means ___________________(谚语的含义). The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. ( also theoretically )
A case in point is ___________________(例子一). Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ___________________(谚语).
With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ___________________(谚语). The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..
(六)：图表作文的框架
As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___________________(作文题目的议题)has been on rise/ decrease (goes up/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from___________________in ___________________to___________________ in___________________. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying
that___________________.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for ___________________. On the one hand, ___________________. On the other hand, ___________________is due to the fact that___________________. In addition, ___________________is responsible for ___________________. Maybe there are some other reasons to show___________________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that ___________________. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
(七)：实用性写作(申请信)
June 8,2011
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your advertisement for the position in___________________.And I would like to write a letter to tell you that___________________./ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising./ I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed. On the one hand, ___________________.On the other hand, ___________________.I am enclosing my resume for your kind consideration and reference.
I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview. I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience./ I am looking forward to your replies at your earliest convenience.
Best regards for your health and success.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
(八)：现象说明文
Recently ___________________.What amazes us most is___________________.It is true that___________________.
There are many reasons explaining___________________.The main reason is___________________.What is more,___________________.Thirdly,___________________.
As a result,___________________.
Considering all there, ___________________.For one thing,___________________;for another,___________________.In Conclusion,___________________.
5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally(强烈推荐)
6)to start with, next, in addition, finally(强烈推荐)
7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least(强烈推荐)
8)most important of all, moreover, finally
9)on the one hand, on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
10)for one thing, for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
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