英语作文框架

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第1篇:英语作文框架

基于核心素养框架的高考作文命题解读与思考

摘要:高考作文命题与学生发展核心素养之间存在着特定的对应关系。通过推导,厘清二者之间存在的有机联系,提出相应的教学策略,为实现高中作文教学训练的有序化提供有益的思路。

关键词:高考作文;学生发展核心素养;立德树人

每年高考作文命题的内容都有所变化,这促使高考作文备考方式也随之改变。但是,作为国家级的教育考试,高考作文命题绝不是随性而为,势必要遵循一定的教育规律,要贯彻国家的教育意志。教师要探究其中的命题原则,寻找其中的命题规律,揣摩高考作文命题变与不变的规则,让学生高考备考能够顺势而为,有所作为。

《普通高中语文课程标准》明确了作文考试命题的思路与框架:“以具体情境为载体”“设计典型任务”。新课标所指的情境包括个人体验情境、社会生活情境和学科认知情境等,其内涵与外延相当宽泛。那么,哪些类型的情境和任务才是高中作文教学应该重视的环节呢?教育部为高考命题定位的原则是立德树人,那么,高中作文教学中要如何立德树人呢?

要回答以上问题,就有必要推究中国学生发展核心素养与高考命题之间的对应关系。

中国学生发展核心素养指的是中国学生应具备的,能够适应终身发展和社会发展需要的必备品格和关键能力。其内容如表1所示:

表1回答了一名全面发展的高中生需要具备什么德,要成长为什么样的人的方向问题,也为高考命题考查学生的写作能力提供了权威的依据。基于表1来推究2017年至2019年的高考语文全国Ⅰ卷作文题会发现其与该表素养框架图之间存在着特定的对应关系。具体如表2所示:

从表2的高考命题情境设置与学生发展核心素养的对应点中我们可以清晰地看到:在落实立德树人原则时,高考命题或显性或隐性地存在着一个抓手,即教育部制定的中国学生发展核心素养。在选用相关的情景设置点时,命题者往往会在特定的学生发展核心素养潜藏着考查预期。从表1的推导中我们还可以发现近三年高考命题的两个规律:

规律一:注重对不同类型学生发展核心素养进行考查

作为高考作文命题,命题内涵如果能够多元化,那么就更能够考查出不同类型学生的思维广度与深度,为具备不同素养特长的学生提供更为广阔的写作舞台。从上文对表格的简略归纳中可以看出, 2017年、2018年高考作文考查了学生的6种素养, 2019年高考作文考查了学生的5种素养。无论命题情境设置点是宏观事件还是微观生活,命题者都着力留下了足够多的素养思维空间,以此来实现素养考查的多元化,进而把立德树人的精神有效具体化。

规律二:素养考查的情境落实具有典型的时代性

《普通高中语文课程标准》在“命题的原则”一项中特别强调:“选用的语言材料要具有时代性、典型性和多样性,贴近学生生活。”任务驱动型写作命题已经日渐成熟,关注社会、思考生活、重视热点,这些都构成了近年高考语文作文命题的情境设置方式。2017年与2018年高考语文作文命题注重对“一带一路”等具有宏觀思维向度的情境进行考查,2019年高考语文全国Ⅱ卷作文题关于中国青年的责任使命的思考就很好地继承了前两年高考语文全国Ⅰ卷作文题的命题思路。2019年高考语文全国Ⅰ卷作文题考查的关于劳动的思考,把生活的微观层面与国家的宏观层面巧妙地融为一体,显性落实了中国学生发展核心素养中的“劳动意识”这一要点,该题的设置更贴近学生的现实生活,不仅让学生有话可说,也为学生留下了深度挖掘的思考空间。2019年高考语文全国Ⅲ卷作文题通过小林漫画来让学生阐述一个熟知的师生关系话题,以此考查学生的健全人格与人文情怀素养,这个话题表面看似与社会热点无关,实则不然。在2019年,教育领域就有一个热点话题:是否赋予教师教育惩戒权。《中国教育报》在2019年3月发表了《大数据透视两会教育热点》,其中多位代表委员提出了“尽快启动立法,明确教师权责。”《中国青年报》在 2019年4月发表了《适合的教育应从三个维度展开》,指出“赋予教师一定的惩戒权,是当务之急。”这些教育反思最终受到了国务院的高度关注,《人民日报》在 2019年7月发表了《中共中央国务院关于深化教育教学改革全面提高义务教育质量的意见》,指出要“制定实施细则,明确教师教育惩戒权。” 可见,师生关系是2019年教育领域的热点话题,只不过高考命题需要从立德树人的角度进行引导,所以,温馨的小林漫画入选高考命题就不足为奇了。可见,近年的高考作文命题始终扎根于现实生活的热土之中,在热点事件中寻找发展学生核心素养与学科核心素养的契合点。

在明确了两种素养的内在关系后,高中语文写作教学就有了相应的训练方向。为此,教师有必要做好两方面的备考工作。

一、依据中国学生发展核心素养框架图开展有序的写作训练

教育部提出的中学生发展核心素养包括18个点,这就意味着高中写作教学可以衍生出18个基本训练专题,既可以对各个专题进行独立训练,也可以对多个专题开展综合训练。例如,教师通过2019年深圳一模的作文题作为审美情趣素养的专项训练题,要求学生除了完成课堂写作外,还要以“美”为话题,化用课内诗歌素材,积累课外典型事例与名言。教师还可以指导学生拓展学习清华大学校长邱勇在2017年本科生开学典礼上的演讲稿《向美而行》等文章,以点带面深入挖掘,使学生系统掌握关于“美”与“健康生活”的相关素材。写作教学就这样从点到面,从文字磨合到精神锤炼,让学生熟悉发展核心素养的各个专题,使学生多角度、多层面的积累立德树人的优秀写作资料,潜移默化地提升教学品质。

二、跟着权威媒体学写作,培育学生应有的时代意识

如何让学生与时代的热潮保持应有的共振,不与时代和社会脱节呢?这是当前教师开展高中语文写作教学不可回避的问题。有学生就曾经表达过其关于写作的困惑:“高中生本身接触外界事物就比较少,即使平日有使用手机或者电脑了解时事,都是比较单调且碎片化的,不能形成一套比较系统全面的知识体系。”这位学生的困惑很有代表性。教师可创造性地推行“跟着大报学写作”的写作训练模式,依据学生发展核心素养要点,教师每周从《人民日报》《中国青年报》等权威媒体评论板块中筛选贴近学生生活和认知能力的评论文章,及时印发给学生让其开展学习。在读报中,学生学会了与时代热点保持同频感应,摆脱了以往积累时事论据时知其然而不知其所以然的弊病;在应对时代性强的写作话题与情境时,学生不仅有话可说,而且其思维更有深度、更有力度。正如一位学生的活动感言:“读大报,始终在探寻意义与价值的路上前行,找到自己的定位,扣好人生的第一粒扣子。”由此可见,语文教师有必要在教材之外,以权威媒体为师,以时代为舟,以发展核心素养为帆,开拓写作教学的新天地,使写作教学的路越走越顺。

求木之长者,必固其根本;欲流之远者,必浚其泉源。高考作文承载着国家的教育意志,教师有必要从学生发展核心素养的本源上踏踏实实地做好备考工作,创造性的发挥教学的主动性,寻找立德树人的有效教学方法,提升写作教学的效率,让培养全面发展的人的教育目标在语文教学上得到应有的体现。

作者简介:李庆生(1974—),男,广东省汕头市潮阳林百欣中学高级教师,主研方向为高中作文读与写。

作者:李庆生

第2篇:英语作文框架

英语作文框架是怎么样的比较好,下面小编整理一篇推荐大家参考;

一般第一段都是总括,根据作文提示谢咯

第二段就是分析,这具体也要看作文要求,一般都是分析两种对立观点,或者分析作文要求中指定观点

第三段就是陈述自己的观点和看法咯

我大致可以给你一个框架

第一段 with the development of ……,more and more people are concerned about the problem that +主题句. accordingly,后接伴随问题的新问题is becoming more and more serious

第二段 confronted with the +问题或现象,we should take a seriou of effective measures to cope with the problems. firstly,secondly,thirdly,随你发挥了

第三段,就是提出自己的观点看法了。as far as i am concerned/as far as i can see/form my own view,the best way is…… 接着陈述自己这样认为的理由了

以上是针对作文要求你针对不好的现象提出解决方案的

下面这种则是针对 议论型的

第一段 when it comes to +题目要求的观点,some people argue that + 一个关于观点的句子。 然后后面接着写这些人这样认为的理由

第二段写与前面这个观点相反的观点。 while/on the contrary,other people have a different opinion,+一个关于这个观点的句子。后面接着写理由。

第三段也是陈述自己的看法

还有具体不懂的你也可以继续问我

WISH YOU GOOD LUCK!

各类体裁英语考试作文框架

第一段一般只写三句

第一句:It is widely believed that by many people for some time that ...

第二句:One reason they think is that...

第三句:The other reason they hold is that...

第二段一般只写三句

第一句:While others argue that ...

第二句:They maintain that...

第三句:They also claim that...

第三段写四句

第一句:From what has been discussed above, we may come to the conclusion that ...

第二句:On the one hand, ...

第三句:On the other hand, ...

第四句:Only in this way can we ...

图表作文

第一段只写三句

第一句:As is shown in the graph above, we can see clearly that great changes have taken place in … from…to…

第二句:The first … years saw…

第三句:The last … years witnessed …

第二段只写四句

第一句:What has caused this problem? It seems to me that there are … reasons.

第二句:Firstly, …

第三句:Secondly,…

第四句:Finally,…

第三段只写四句

第一句:How to solve the problem has become a hot issue among many people.

第二句:For one thing, …

第三句:For another, …

第四句:Only in this way can we successfully solve the problem.

现象作文

第一段只写两句

第一句:In recent years, there has been…

第二句:How to solve the problem has become a hot issue among many people.

第二段只写四句

第一句:What has caused this problem? It seems to me that there are … reasons.

第二句:Firstly, …

第三句:Secondly,…

第四句:Finally,…

第三段只写四句

第一句:How to solve the problem has become a hot issue among many people.

第二句:For one thing, …

第三句:For another, …

第四句:Only in this way can we successfully solve the problem.

书信作文

第一段只写两句

第一句:I am writing this letter today to …

第二句:My name is … and I am …

第二段按照题目要求写:

第三段只写三句

第一句:I sincerely hope you can take my letter seriously.

第二句:Your prompt response will be highly appreciated.

第三句:Thanks a lot for your time and consideration.

谚语作文

第一段只写四句

第一句:It is … that …

第二句:You cannot … until you …

第三句:The more you …, the more …

第四句:If you …, you …

第二段举例写

第一句:Examples can be easily found to make a case for this proverb.

第二句:Let’s take … for instance.

第三句:…

第四句:Another illustration of this is…

欢迎继续阅读以下英语作文:

微博英语作文

英语作文100字

六级英语作文模板

第3篇:英语作文框架

各类体裁英语四级作文框架 第一段一般只写三句

第一句:It is widely believed that by many people for some time that ... 第二句:One reason they think is that... 第三句:The ohter reason they hold is that... 第二段一般只写三句

第一句:While others argue that ... 第二句:They maintain that... 第三句:They also claim that... 第三段写四句

第一句:From what has been discussed above, we may come to the conclusion that ... 第二句:On the one hand, ... 第三句:On the other hand, ... 第四句:Only in this way can we ... 图表作文 第一段只写三句

第一句:As is shown in the graph above, we can see clearly that great changes have taken place in … from…to…

第二句:The first … years saw… 第三句:The last … years witnessed … 第二段只写四句

第一句:What has caused this problem? It seems to me that there are … reasons. 第二句:Firstly, … 第三句:Secondly,…

第四句:Finally,… 第三段只写四句

第一句:How to solve the problem has become a hot issue among many people. 第二句:For one thing, … 第三句:For another, …

第四句:Only in this way can we successfully solve the problem. 现象作文 第一段只写两句

第一句:In recent years, there has been…

第二句:How to solve the problem has become a hot issue among many people. 第二段只写四句

第一句:What has caused this problem? It seems to me that there are … reasons. 第二句:Firstly, … 第三句:Secondly,… 第四句:Finally,… 第三段只写四句

第一句:How to solve the problem has become a hot issue among many people. 第二句:For one thing, … 第三句:For another, …

第四句:Only in this way can we successfully solve the problem. 书信作文 第一段只写两句

第一句:I am writing this letter today to … 第二句:My name is … and I am …

第二段按照题目要求写: 第三段只写三句

第一句:I sincerely hope you can take my letter seriously. 第二句:Your prompt response will be highly appreciated. 第三句:Thanks a lot for your time and consideration. 谚语作文 第一段只写四句 第一句:It is … that …

第二句:You cannot … until you … 第三句:The more you …, the more … 第四句:If you …, you … 第二段举例写

第一句:Examples can be easily found to make a case for this proverb. 第二句:Let’s take … for instance. 第三句:…

第四句:Another illustration of this is…

第4篇:英语作文框架

一.框架

万能框架1(对比两者取其一)

eg.

Where to Live-----in the City or in the Country? Where to Live ----in a Large Family or a Small One? Which to Prefer ---Private Cars or Public transportation?

Many people appreciate the conveniences of … But…is also attractive. With…

Both…and…, however, have their own disadvantages. In…And…also has many problems, such as…

As far as I’m concerned, I…So, given the chance, I would prefer to….

万能框架2 (解决问题)

eg.

For a Better Understanding Between Parents and Children For a Better Understanding Between Consumers and Manufacturers For a Better Understanding Between Audience and Spring Festival Galas

Nowadays there is often a lack of understanding between…often complain about…, while…usually think…Then, when…

There are some possible reasons for the present situation. First, …Second, …Finally, …As a result, the gap between them is growing wider and wider. To bridge…gap, in my opinion, both…and…should make an effort. …As for their…, both…should make allowance for each other. If they will take the first step by…, it won’t be long before the arrival of a better understanding between

万能框架3 (社会现象,焦点评论)

eg.

Advertisements on TV Examination Cheating Pirate Books

Today more and more…are seen… It is difficult to…without…Occasionally…In a word, whether you …it or not, …pours into…

In general, there are…main reasons leading to the prevalence of…With the development of…many…have realized the important role of…What is more, …are interested in…

As far as I am concerned, I…because…But there is no denying that…Therefore, I think it is really high time that…

万能框架4(对事物的不同观点)

eg.

On Making Friends

On Bargains

On Advertising …one can hardly…every sign points to the fact that …In fact…

Some people believe…while others think that…Whatever comment one may make…If…and if …and if…then…

With different outlooks, individuals may have different principles in…As far as I am concerned, I would…I will…

万能框架5 (社会问题:污染、希望工程,诚信;家庭计划)

eg.

The “Project Hope”

Environmental Pollution

Cheating

…is the key …However, …Therefore, …is determined to…

…is of great necessity. As we know, …not only…but also…Moreover, China, as a developing country, is not likely…Therefore, … My suggestion is that…

万能框架6(怎样获得成功、友谊、快乐、健康)

eg.

Good Health Friendship Success

The desire for…is universal. Especially nowadays, the possession of…is regarded by nearly everyone as …Only…can we expect to… How to…then? First, …Second, …Finally, …

As for me, I have always been taking care to…So, I can…

万能框架7(针对不良现象)

eg.

Tobacco Consumption

Job Problem for Graduates

Car Accidents Declining

…is known as one of the most serious problems in today’s world…can be seen everywhere…As is shown in the graph, …

…Furthermore, …As a result, …experiencing a decrease…So I believe a …tomorrow…will be achieved through efforts of every person. 万能框架8(批评式)

eg.

Comparison and Unrealistic Competition

Breaking Promise / Aids / Disable

As…nowadays many people swarm into the tide of…we may observe that some of …are nothing but…should…just like …by… However, the reasons for this phenomenon are complicated and such…are very harmful not only to…but to our society. For example, some people want to…such as…based on… With…expect to… with a sense of… while… based mainly on… Nevertheless… undermine… which will, in the long run, undermine the rapid…development of our country, too. So, it’s high time that we took measures to put an end to any kind of…We many…or fortify special law into effect. And what’s more, why can’t these people…and…

万能框架9(揭示说明问题—解决问题)

eg.

The Ups and Downs of Population Growth The Prejudice against Women Changes in College Students’ way of Spending Summer Vacation

As is clearly shown by the…Obviously…

There are…reasons for this…One is that…Another (important) reason lies in the fact that…(What’s more…) Therefore…

To…I suggest/think…In a word, if…there is certain to be…

万能框架10(批评与建议)

eg.

Overpollution and Land

Roads and Cars

The two pictures show us that…If this situation goes on, we will surely have… It is most likely that…not only…but also…First…Second…Last but not least… Only on the basis of…In my opinion…Otherwise…

二.过渡词

过渡词的分类:根据过渡词在文章中的作用,大致可分四类:

用于“启”的过渡词语

first, first of all, at first ,in the first place, firstly , to begin with ,to start with, recently , now, at present, in recent years 等

用于“承”的过渡词语

second, secondly ,similarly, in addition ,besides, then, furthermore, moreover , what is more, what is worse, for example, for instance, certainly ,surely, obviously, in other words ,especially, particularly, in particular ,indeed, still ,third, thirdly ,truly ,in fact , in plain terms(=simply speaking ), in practice, for the most part ( 基本上),at the same time , no doubt 等

用于“转”的过渡词语

however , on the other hand ,on the contrary ,in contrast ,in any case, at any rate (无论如何),conversely(相反的),nevertheless, otherwise, or ,or else, while…, whereas …,but ,despite…, in spite of …, yet , instead等 用于“和”的过渡词语

Consequently , as a consequence, therefore, as a result, above all (=most important), thus , after all (毕竟), generally speaking , in general, finally , at last , eventually, hence, in short(总之) , in conclusion , in a word(总之简言之) ,in sum (总之), on the whole(就整体而言) , to sum up 等

三.句型

表示比较的常用句型

句型1 X is mach (a great deal, a lot ,considerably, somewhat, a bit , a little, slightly, hardly , scarcely, only just) smaller (bigger , cheaper) than Y 句型2 X is exactly (precisely, just, practically, more or less, almost, nearly, approximately, about)the same as Y 句型3 X is quite (completely, entirely, totally) different from Y 句型4 X is not quite as/so big (expensive, interesting etc.) as Y 句型5 X and Y are different in every way (respect ) 句型6 X and Y have a little (something ,much,etc,) in common 句型7 one of the differences between X and Y is that… 句型8 with regard to…, x is bigger than y 句型9 x is different from y in that…

句型10 on the one hand, x is (has ,does)…; on the other (hand), x is (has ,does)

表示因果的句型

句型1 The cause of/ reason for higher prices was an increase in demand. 句型2 The / one effect/consequence/ result of an increase in demand is higher prices. 句型3 The demand has increased. Therefore / so / as a result / accordingly / consequently / because of this / thus / hence / for this reason / now the prices are higher. 句型4 because /as /since / now that the demand has increased, the prices are higher. 句型5 An increase in demand often causes / results in / leads to / produces higher prices. 句型6 Higher prices are caused by / due to an increase in demand 句型7 The prices are higher because of / as a result of / on account of / owing to / through /because /since/as there is an increase in demand. 句型8 When /If there is an increase in demand, (then) prices rise. 其他句型:

句型1 A number of/The majority of/A lot of/A few/most/A minority of students are /were able to obtain all their course books from the libraries. 句型2 During the period 1874-1974 / From 1874 to 1974 /Since 1874 /For a hundred years/From 1874 to1974, … 句型3 As can be seen from /in the chart/ diagram /table /graph, … 句型4

According to / as is shown in table1 / figure2 / chart3 /… 句型5 It can be seen from the chart/ diagram / table /graph/figures /statistics that … 句型6 There is / was /has been a slight / small / slow /gradual / steady / large / dramatic / sharp / rapid / sudden rise / increase / fluctuation / decrease / decline / reduction / fall / drop / in prices / population / production / personal incomes / demand/ water supply 句型7 in relation to x A is twice / three time as high / large as B 句型8 Compared with x, y is 句型9 It is generally / widely accepted / argued / held / believed that… 句型10 Therefore /thus/on this basis/ given this it can be / may concluded /deduced/ inferred that… 句型11 From the table /figures / data / results / information it can / may be seen / concluded /shown / estimated /calculated /inferred that… 句型12 In conclusion / in short / in a word / finally we can/may say/it can /may be said that 句型13 The first thing/ first of all we have / I should like to consider… 句型14 It is a fact / there is no doubt / I believe that…

One of the main arguments in favor of / against x is that … 句型15

I agree / disagree with x when he writes /says that… 句型16 X is correct, but / however /on the other hand

第5篇:英语作文框架

(1)0912 Today , it is widely acknowledged that ........................................However ,as for this phenomenon ,opinions vary from person to person . Some people insist that ......................................................................However , many other parents do not agree . .....................................................

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As is vividly /’vivid/(生动的) indicated in the above chart ,the number of people ...........has increased considerably in the past decade . Especially in recent 5 years , the figuer has been more than tripled (三倍),suring from ........to over .............

The reasons for the increasing of ...........................are as follows ...Firstly , .................................................Secondly , .................................Thirdly , ............................................................

From the changes reflected in the chart , we can predict that .............................................On the one hand , ................................................

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In recent decades , .............................................As a result , .............

It’s no wonder that some people hold the idea that .....................To start with , ......................What’s more , ..................................Last but not least , ..............................................

As far as I am concerned , ...................................................................However , .........................................................

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…………………………………………………………………………………..First and foremost ,…………………..........................................What is more , ………………………..

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Generally speaking , ……………………………………… ………………….For one thing ,

…………………………………… ……For another , …………………………………

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Recently ,………..has been brought to popular attention in china .

………………………………………………………………………………….

Awareness of the matter in question is one thing , but more important to us is the step of how to cope with it . ……………………….. ….Only in this way can we …………………….

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Nowadays , there exist a heated discussion in ………………………………………………..However , as for ………. , different students have different ideas .

Some syudents hold that ………………………………,so that ……………………Some students …………………….. . Still ,others………………………..

As far as I am concerned , ……………………………………………… . So I think ……………

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Now more and more people realized that it is important for ………………………………

………………………………………..First , ………………………….Next , …………………………………..Finally , ……………………….

……………………………………………………………………………

1. As for such a question , different people hold different views . some believe that ……………………………….While there also sounds an opposite voice ,……………………

In my opinion , I am absolutely in favor of ..........................

第6篇:英语作文万能框架

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.

Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.

To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.

Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)__作文题目_______ .It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.

As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all, __途径一______. In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.

Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways. But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.

It is well know to us that the proverb: " ___谚语_______" has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means ____谚语的含义_______. The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. ( also theoretically ) A case in point is ___例子一______. Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.

With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job.

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.

People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand, ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.

As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______. It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________. joozone.com

第7篇:大学英语四级英语作文真题及英语作文框架

We can see from the illustration there is a father talking to his son. Having heard his son’s words “Dad, I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weapons”, the father replies, “If you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything”, pointing the garbage can beside him.

Funny and common as the conversation sounds, it reflects that the father intends to advise his son to do small things before undertaking the big. Unquestionably, doing small things is the first step of success and will lay root for doing something big. By doing something small, we are enabled to accumulate experience, master skills and train ourselves to be more patient. In other words, we can be well prepared for further challenges in the course of fulfilling small things. By contrast, those who set out to do something big will be constantly haunted by disappointment, frustrations or even failures. As when opportunity “something big” appears, they can hardly seize them because of the lack of experience and confidence stems from doing small things. Taking the picture presented above as a case in point, how can the little boy succeed in disposing of nuclear weapons if he even doesn’t know how to empty the dustbin?

From my perspective, under no circumstances should we undervalue the power of doing small things. Instead, we should regard small things as the source of experience, skills and the prerequisite of success. “Great achievement only belongs to those who can do small things perfectly.” Aristotle once said.

The Impact of the Internet on the Way People Communicate

Being a product of high-technology, Internet and computers are being more and more widely used in our everyday life. They can offer us fast and convenient service for communication.

In recent years, computers and the Internet have become popular among university students. Quite a lot of them use them at school to keep in touch with their families and friends instead of going home to see them in person or writing letters. Which, of course brings conveniences to them, but I don’t think it is good to do

so.

Internet

makes

electronic communication convenient, but it will never replace face to face contact. Both electronic communication and face-to-face contact are important in our life. What we should do it to apply each communication ways in the right way.

Technology development enables us to communication with parents and friend in a brand new and fast way, but it is face-to face contact that deepens the feelings and emotions between people.

范文二:

Due to the wide use of computers and the development of Internet, more and more people like to chat on the Internet. We tend to pay more attention to electronic communication than to face-to-face contact.

As electronic communication is not limited by space, we can chat with others where there is Internet with our tools such as computers, mobile phones and pads. However, when we chat with others online, we cannot express our feelings fully. Just as the picture shows, the parents cannot touch or hug their child. We know that body language plays an important role in our communication, but the electronic communication cannot do this. For example, when we are sad, we need more love and warmth, a real hug from our parents or friends can mean much more to us than just words through electronic communication.

范文三:

The Impact of the Mobile Phone in People’s Life

The thought-provoking drawing mirrors a common phenomenon in contemporary society that there is the negative influence of mobile phone. As is subtly shown in the picture,so many people are too much addicted to cell phones that they use walking sticks to see the road. What a meaningful cartoon!

It is to me that indulging in mobile phones produces native influences on body and mind. First and foremost, overusing mobile phones is detrimental to physical health for watching mobiles for a long stretch definitely impairs one’s eyesight. Suppose that a man is addicted in cell phones in whatever situation, it will be very disadvantageous for him to concentrate on his work, learning, or daily life and is very likely to hurt him. Furthermore, overusing cell phones adversely affects state of mind. An addict may stay inside his bubble instead of pursuing other endeavors, which eventually prevents the growth of think skills.

It is high time that we took effective measures to curb this trend. I cherish a belief that cell phones themselves are not good or bad and we can benefit a lot from it as long as we take a good control over them.

Therefore, though electronic communication brings convenience to our life, I still don’t think the electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact.

范文四:

The impact of the Internet on the way people communicate

As to this picture above, an interesting dialogue happens between the parents and their child on the Internet. The parents, sitting in front of a computer, say “...we look forward to seeing you again the next time your computer crashes...” Funny as it shows, which naturally leads us to be associated with the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate. It is no dout that face-to-face contact is inevitably impaired by electronic communication in the era of Internet.

Some suggest that the net brings about changes in interpersonal communication. With the net, we could contact people to share a great deal of information from anywhere at anytime. What’s more, we could learn a large amount of knowledge from different persons on such an opening flat. However, others insist that the internet has a bad influence on interpersonal communication. Even worse, some people are addicted to surfing the net so much as to isolate themselves from their families and friends, which is not beneficial to further interpersonal relationship and promote the feeling of harmony.

From my point of view, every coin has two sides. When we enjoy the benefit that the net brings us, we need to realize that the virtual net could never take place of the face-to-face communication among human beings. After all, we all live in a real world. Therefore, it is advisable for us to have a more face to face communication with our families, friends and acquaintances in real life instead of merely through the Internet. As can

be

clearly

seen

from

the graph/table/chart (As is shown in the table/figure), great changed have taken place in_______, The _________ have/has skyrocketed/jumped from _____ to _____.

When it comes to the reasons for the changes, different people give different explanations. Here I shall just give a few.To begin with, ______What’s more,___________, Last but not least, ________.

While it is desirable that ___________, there are still some problems and difficulties for __________

Firstly,

__________

,In

addition, __________ ,In a word, __________ .

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