高三英语作文写作复习
Directions: Write an English composition in over 120 words based on the picture and the instructions given below.
简要描述图片内容，就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。
范文：
In the picture, a girl is riding a bicycle, but her father is on her right showing the direction, her mother is on her left with a first-aid box and behind her is her granny, who is out of breath. They are all running as they are holding the bicycle. Sweat is falling down from their foreheads. The girl is shouting, “Leave me alone, I can manage.”
Today parents and grandparents tend to worry too much about their children. As an lonely child, I am looked after from head to foot by my parents. But is it necessary for them to do so? No! Indeed, they love me, but I don’t want this kind of love. I need independence more, because independence is important in modern society. Without it, we will not be able to meet challenges in the future. Certainly, I don’t mean that I don’t need my parents’ help, but I want them to help me gain my independence.
Dear parents, please understand what we need!
高三英语作文：我的理想
当我闲得没事时，就总自己用微波炉做点东西吃。一天，爸爸看见我这样，说我长大恐怕是要当厨师了。我立刻把头摇得像拨浪鼓似的，说：“那不是我的理想，我长大想做IT(信息技术)行业。”
没错，自从五年前爸爸给我买来电脑后，我就一天天地熟悉它。到了去年，我已经和它结下了不解之缘。从那时候开始，我就想要在信息技术行业取得成就，为国家计算机事业做出贡献。
可是爸爸说我在这个行业中只能做“游戏测试员”，就是什么游戏新出来，总是先让我玩玩，报告游戏中有什么错误。我觉得他说的没有错，我最近一段时间老是玩游戏，那些FLASH之类的老也不用了。
最近几天，我萌生出了一个不好的想法：将我玩的那个网络游戏的服务器给黑了，将我的账号修改成最高级别。可是，我想了又想，这样做是不对的，而且被网络警察抓到也是不好的。而且当黑客也需要很高的电脑技术的。成为IT行业的一员是我的理想，所以我要向这个目标前进，提高自己的电脑技术.
When I got settled, the total use of the microwave to do their own things to eat. One day, my father saw me, I am afraid to say that I grew up as a cook. I immediately shaken like a rattle-drum head, you said : "That is not my ideal. When I grow up I want to IT (information technology) industries. "Yes, I bought a computer five years ago after his father, I am familiar with it day by day. Until last year, and I have formed a deep bond with it. From then on, I want success in the information technology industry to make contributions to the cause of national computer. But my father said I could only do in the field "testing the game," is what the new game, and always let me play with, the report there will be any games. I think what he said is not their fault, I always play games recently, those who do not have a veteran like Flash. In recent days, I sprouted out of a bad idea : I will be playing the game that the network server to the black. My account will revise the highest level. However, I Xiangliaoyouxiang, this is wrong, but was caught by the police network is not good. When hackers but also need high computer skills. As a member of the IT industry is my ideal, I would like to advance this goal, to improve their computer skills
My View on Developing the Car Industry
With the development of modern industry,more and more families are able to have their own cars.But,seeing the problems like air pollution and the reduction of resources,some people appeal for the reduction of private cars.Still,I think there is every reason for the even faster development of the car industry.
Thanks to the development of the car industry, we do not have to cram in the buses, but can enjoy free travel in our. own cars, we can go to more places in a leisure way. Transportation becomes comfortable and easy. But there are those who worry that too many cars may cause more traffic problems, serious:air pollution and the exhaustion ofresources, While these problems may be true, they can be solved and some are being solved. For example, we can invent cars that: can save fuel or use other types of energy so that cars can still 'be used even though resources run short. To reduce pollution, people have manufactured
many cars without pollution. We can relieve the traffic pressure by building more and more roads or-adopt computer-monitored automated highways.
For all the contemporary problems cars bring, no one can deny the convenience cars bring us and ignore the effort We make to solve these problems. Therefore,the development of the car industry is necessary, and it should develop as quickly as possible.
高三英语作文：Road Safety To cross the road, look around. Not on the road to play and run. See the red light to stop for a while. His trip to see the green light. This is for teachers and parents often told us, we often back, and we should not only talk about this sentence, it still deeply recorded in the hearts of safety in the first place, so that accidents may becoming less and less of. Let us surrounded in a safe happy and healthy growth, the construction of our home more beautiful!
Allow the possibility of traffic accidents have become less and less, it is necessary to known rules of the road, here I am giving you some rules of the road you:
1. Cyclists should follow the right side of bike paths.
2. Should follow the sidewalk to cross the road (or bridge, the underground passage);
3. When the red light to stop, see the green light before.
4. Take the bus after the first, not to each other, do not逼抢bit crowded.
5. Within walking on the sidewalk, there is no sidewalk to walk on the roadside.
6. It should be noted, when we are walking vehicles are not allowed to chase,猛跑.
7. Are not allowed in the vehicle suddenly crossed near.
8. Not be allowed to pass through, to sit upon the sidewalk, roadway and railroad crossing guard-rails.
9. Are not allowed to hold cars on the road to recover the vehicle, forced parabolic拦车and hit cars.
10. Pre-school children in the street or walk on the road, there must be led by adults.
11. Allowed the railings across the road.
These are our common life should be in compliance with the rules of the road, we would also like to promote in the class column on the column or exhibition, multi-paste a number of compliance with the rules of the road, not red light running and other words like a warning so that students better understand the traffic safety importance. School can also be invited to the police his uncle, the door to the students on the traffic class, so students know better to help the traffic of human beings ... ...Security related to our life, we hope parents, the flower is the future of the motherland, the motherland’s future, we need to, and so we must make to comply with traffic regulations, protect our lives, but also to the safety of others. Let us follow traffic safety, to minimize traffic accidents, so traffic will never disappear. This is the call of the times!
作文：(“谋篇、遣词、造句” “言之有据、言之有理、言之有物，赏心悦目”)
▲ 考查点：
1、书面表达的主要类别：
提纲类：即题目提供详细的要点要求考生综合表达，主要包括概括不同观点的议论文，描述人物、地
方、活动等的介绍说明文
图表类：即通过列出表格、饼图、柱状图等结合文字要求表达
图画类即漫画类：要求读懂漫画，明白寓意，进行分析
材料类即给出英文材料要求考生概括、总结分析。
交际应用类：主要是书信、通知、演讲稿等。
2、近年来，书面表达更是越来越偏向于开放性和灵活性，提供的直接信息要点大大减少。主要是考查学生的综合语用表达能力。所以在题材、主题、结构、段落、思想性诸方面 自己就要有意识地去思考和组建。另外，还要有应对之前没有复习过的题型、没有见过的题材、没有写过的话题的能力。
(历年高考话题似乎很少能被猜到，所以临场发挥很重要)
▲ 做题注意点：
审题：确定主题、题材、要点;构思：理清结构、段落、细节;
表达：确保准确、地道、丰富;卷面：强调整洁、工整、漂亮。
1、阅卷老师凭借总体印象定档：卷面、书写、首段、末段、主题句、段落等，然后再看细节
2、审清题意、看清图意(文字提示和图示)，把握要点(划出或圈出关键信息)，理清思路(开头，过程，结尾——尽量打草稿或提纲)。没有特别要求不要写标题。确定题材、格式、人称、时态(一致性)。
3、注意与所给开头的自然衔接、连接词的使用;去除时态、人称、单复数等低级错误3避免超字数、卷
面凌乱;动词、名词等实词，复合句使用的多样化;关注到思维的深度和广度„„。
4.选择有把握的、正确的句型写，写常见的句子，少用生僻的词，表达要地道自然，尽可能不要重复同
一个句型，用词、用句要丰富。可适当选用较为复杂的句型，1-2句即可，但必须要有十足的把握。同时要尽可能避免使用无用句，要具体、不空洞，如有省略号要补充表达1—2句。
5.注意动词、形容词、副词及其它词汇的正确使用，所给的词汇要用到。
6.为增强语感及流畅性，要适当采用连接词。(连接词背诵记忆)
7、对现象的评价或批判一定有积极、正向，一分为二，不能太消极、片面，甚至极端
8、字迹端正、书面整洁(不用修正液、胶带)，不多字少字(140---160)，一般分三段，各段有明确的主
题句。
9、写完后再复看一遍，确保正确率。注意大小写、拼写、标点符号等细节。不要留下与作文无关的任何痕迹。
附：主要类型：
1、观点类：
Para 1: 总述 (时态一般为现在的各种时态)
* Nowadays, there’s a widespread concern over the issue that…
* We have had a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions./ Opinions are divided. / Opinions vary from person to person.Para 2: 分述几个观点及理由 (通过主题句明确观点并陈述其理由，句式、动词使用要多样化)
* 80% of the students are in favor of… The majority of the people hold the view that…
* However, one fifth of the students/The rest of „ are against„/ Some suppose„, some
believe„, still others argue, some think…
* Some people, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. It’s not only because…but also because… Para 3: 你的观点、理由及建议 (要客观、积极、可操作)
* In my opinion, From my point of view, As far as I’m concerned….
* We should try to bring the advantages of…into full play, and reduce its disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.
* In that case, you can definitely make the most of„
2、漫画类：
Para1: What’s in the picture? (简要描述漫画内容，涉及所给中文提示及图画)
* 关注时态：注意所给开头的暗示，与所给开头自然衔接 。
* 关注需要涉及到的人物、事件，要突出主题和关键信息。人物语言与神情描述要形象、到位，一般不用直接引语。
Para2: What’s behind the picture? (结合生活实际谈漫画所揭示的社会现象，原因，影响：通常是危害，具体按要求。)
* 注意一般不能写成自己的观点，要多角度展开，注意逻辑，要有思维的深度。
Para3: What’s your opinion? (你对此现象的观点：反思或建议)
* 你的看法要积极、正面;建议要具体可操作。
3、图表类：
Para1：不要遗漏所给文字描述。要用不同的句式来描述图示内容，可采用比较的方法。
Para2：结合现实分析现象，通常是对导致此种现象的原因或后果分析。
Para3：谈谈你的看法：往往是提出建议或希望。
* 图表作文的读图(怎样读图?)
如果图示内容太多，尽可能抓住明显特征(几个点)， 主要是变化之处和独特之处，不必面面俱到。同时注意描述过程中不能光写趋势，一定要出现数字描述，如account for, make up,…);如果图示内容较少，则需要逐个表述(如饼图40%，one tenth，three fifths…)
4、材料类：
Para1: Beginning (Summarize)
* 读懂所给材料的主题、根据要求判断要概括什么(哪些方面)?要注意什么?不能超字数，时态根据原文，要抓住关键词、关键信息，最后可以给一个简单的总结，不能直接使用原句。(有情节需要简单提及一下)
Para2: Body(Required concrete information)
* 考虑如何构建段落，结合主题写细节或根据要求自由发挥，有思想性，表达要简洁。
Prar3：Conclusion (Your opinion)
* 认真阅读中文提示，结合英文材料的主题进行总结，根据要求发表观点，可有所拓展。
(一般材料类作文的第
二、第三段都会给中文提示，关键要审清题意)
There are two main causes of cancer: heredity and environment. We can do nothing to change our heredity, that is, the basic physical characteristics that were passed on to us by our parents. However, we can do a GREat deal to control our environment, which may account for 80-90 %of all cancers.
Environmental pollution can be divided into two kinds: personal and impersonal. Personal pollution may be defined roughly as unhealthy habits such as smoking, drinking, and eating the wrong foods. Clearly, with enough will power we can control this personal environment.
Impersonal pollution, on the other hand, refers to those things which are beyond our individual control. One example would be industrial pollution, which is very hard to control because of the expense involved. It would be expensive in terms of profits and perhaps jobs. The American automobile industry, for example, resisted the law requiring smog-control devices because it feared the added expense would reduce profits. Nevertheless, some laws protecting the environment have been quite successful in reducing pollution.
With the coming of the final exam,our school held on activity named Pressure-reducing Week,which was aimed at relieving the stress and inspiring the students in senior 3 to meet the challenge bravely.Let’s look back what we have done during the activity.
First,the school provided us with a special room to listen to the light music carefully selected by our teachers.Sitting on the soft sofa with the gentle melody,we gradually calmed down and closed our eyes.
Next,we participated in outdoor activities,including a trust fall and a three-legged race.Tired but excited ,we realized the significance of trust and cooperation.
Besides,the school also invited some experts who majored in psychology to give us advice.I consulted them about how to reduce stress before exam and I received helpful tips.
Finally,we held a class meeting themed “We Can Do That ”to conclude what we had attained from the activity.I was elected as the representer to share my feelings .Encouraged by our teachers’s words,we shouting “We Can Do That ”together,and I was filled with confidence.
I really appreciated it that our school held such a meaningful activity to motivate us.I hope all my classmates can achieve their dreams.
人生成功的途径很多，请你根据你的理解，谈谈自己的看法。
Success, as is known, is the pursuit of many ambitious people. It requires much of a person.
In my view, above all, one should be a person of strong perseverance. Rome was not built in a day. On our long way to success, there are undoubtedly many difficulties standing in the way. If we lose heart and give up halfway, nothing can be achieved. Throughout history, we have had many famous successful people in the world, of whom no one is weak-minded. Take the great American scientist Edison as an example, he tried experiment after experiment and had one failure after another before he finally invented the bulb, which lighted up the whole world. So we can conclude perseverance can surely be one of the secrets of success. Furthermore, one needs to work hard to realize his dream just as the famous saying goes “Hard work leads to success”.
Look at these around us and we’ll find diligent people are always the favor of our society. They usually achieve more than expected. Why do so many of our classmates of average intelligence go far ahead of others? Hard work is definitely supposed to be the answer. And still, I hold that one must keep in pace with the informative world. There’s no denying that our world is changing every day. So one can never be locked alone inside his own room, doing his research work and dedicated to book knowledge.
How can an isolated person be well-informed enough to go ahead of others? If so, that could be ridiculous. Success is what one desires. So long as one is perseverant, hard working and up-to-date, I am sure success is near at hand.
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